dratrat1 2014-04-16 09:11:35

Honestly, the song could use a little variety. I know this might be hard to do, I'm not sure how much experience you have with this sort of thing, but the basic undertones for Melancholia could cut in and out occasionally. It also seems to just be the exact same thing repeated over and over, so you could essentially take the first minute, loop it, and there is the rest of the song. Also if you tried using a few different sounding synthesizers, I'm not sure how you do it, or exactly what your particular style is, but if you threw in a base line, I mean, I don't know, it just sounds kind of... Flat. You should try posting some of your poetry though :)

Conal 2014-04-23 00:04:08